Vigil

As moonbeams settle softly on her face,
lay bare the gaunt and haggard visage there,
a woman whose whole life was spent in care
for those who ran and won another race.
Those stippled hands, the measure of her grace,
her shriveled arms, now wasting in despair,
her saddened eyes so sorrowful and spare,
a broken soul who cannot keep apace.
 
Wilting now, her slender body gone,
wishing there were something left to say,
countenance once sparkling, now wan,
as she prepares to make that final trip
to glory, to the everlasting day
when pain no longer whispers from her lips.
 
Those who stand in grief can only wait
and ponder just what might have been,
but death is drawing nigh, it's much too late,
her appearance now so sallow and so lean.
Thoughts turn to their own brief mortalities,
as they reflect on how they will atone,
and justify their improprieties.
 
We cannot cheat the Reaper, foil his plan,
and live a life of immortality,
His grip is irresistible, and none 
can bypass destiny, its fickle charms,
so may she sleep in peace, in purity,
and rest forever in His loving arms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Well, this just gets me going, I will not go quietly into the night. I am arming myself with all kinds of weapons to fight off the inevitable. I could use some help or encouragement if you are in the mood. Don't let me down Keith!
Williams Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Keithan excellent piece of work..David
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Thanks, David!
Roberts Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 11:07 AM
my Mother is very hold and lately very frail, and this one made me cry, so well written, its going to my favourites
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Thanks, Francine!
Goudreau Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:35 PM
Most moving and very well expressed. I could feel the emotions run down the page as I read this captivating poetry. You are an excellent poet and your message touches the soul. Thank you for sharing! Love the title as well. May life and joy be with you and yours for many many moons ahead!
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