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Views Muse 3

Hand waves are relatively cheap considering the benefits they reap. Let's wave to people on our way to God’s golden shore. If they don’t wave back, ..that’s okay … …. we've got plenty more.

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Judy Ball

Date: 8/5/2011 7:55:00 PM

Reminds me of a sign I saw in someone's yard once. They were real friendly people who had a great sense of humor. The put up a sign in their yard where all the cars that passed by could see it. It said,"IF YOU CAN'T STOP ---- WAVE" Great job here. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 12:29:00 AM

Hey, these views muse are really nice. I love this one. Can't believe you never knew who peter pan was for so long. haha

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/1/2011 2:14:00 AM

Oh! and a 7..

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/1/2011 2:11:00 AM

An interesting piece Robert, like the last line..esp.

Daver Austin

Date: 7/30/2011 1:45:00 PM

Thanks for this short homily. In this touchless day and age we need more of this. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/30/2011 12:51:00 PM

lookin forward to the next one, robert... defining piece! :) hugggs, nette

Robert Long Mellott

Date: 7/29/2011 12:10:00 AM

Help? The Muse I play my instrument, to strings of life to others The pleasure in giving, to my detriment tormented by my brothers To feel the pain we share In selling our soul to please In baring our souls we dare In playing our part we tease At times we play instruments... A piano, A guitar, A chime... A bass, A sax, A drum or Trombone All to please as so inclined The muse is a fuse To igniting the spirit... In playing the part we choose To lose ourselves and dare it. rlm '10

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2011 1:55:00 PM

So true, Rob, expressions of friendship are endless so why not use them. A wave, smile or even a nod from a stranger always brightens my day. I love the way you view life. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/28/2011 4:04:00 AM

robert, i wanted this to go on... splendid! :) huggs, nette

Judy Ball

Date: 7/27/2011 10:50:00 PM

Oh a good one Robert. You could extend this a bit if you wanted to. Talking about if you meet someone without a smile it doesn't cost a thing to give him one of yours. Good stuff my friend. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2011 10:25:00 PM

very cleverly written Robert.. I like the waving to God's golden shore luv.. u need and "o" in considering ..second line luv.. awesome words..

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/27/2011 8:11:00 PM

an endless supply in fact. john

Steven Cooke

Date: 7/27/2011 5:18:00 PM

very true, made my day. good poetry