Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Viewing Life Through a Lens

Walking through a very long way,
                                                  Leads me to a breathtaking scenery,
                                             Flowery trees standing proud by rows,
                                        Gust of wind can ease all my sorrows.

                                   Sun rays peek on thick leaves for effects,
                              Green grasses like beds for us to take a rest,
                         Savor the view and its natural freshness,
                    For it is a new found secret happiness.

               With my magic lens I carried everywhere,
          I captured everything that I cherished forever, 
     Everyday I spent with nature is a great moment,
Life on earth becomes my greatest achievements.

November 25, 2012
For Sandy's Viewing A Life Through Lens
Honorable Mention

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Sheri Fresonke Harper December 9, 2012 at 12:54 PM Unusual form Maria, so true how our cameras extend us into a different world, congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 7:09 AM Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Maria. Love Carol

Dustin Self December 5, 2012 at 4:43 PM Hey I see you got a win too my friend!! Good job I like your poem

Joseph May December 3, 2012 at 7:21 PM congrats on your win Maria

Poet Destroyer A December 3, 2012 at 6:12 PM Maria. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda

Sandy Ivy D December 3, 2012 at 4:28 PM Congrats :-) Sandy

Ralph Mason November 29, 2012 at 7:44 AM Enjoyed your poem today. Every day in nature is a great moment. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Andrea Dietrich November 26, 2012 at 2:50 PM Lovely one, Maria. SUre enjoyed the formatting of the stanzas!

Michael J. Falotico November 25, 2012 at 5:08 PM Now I'm glad I logged back on to read this masterpiece. Well don my dear sweet poet. Hugs Michael

Len Gasun November 25, 2012 at 8:27 AM Superbly beautiful poem with its form my dear friend! I love it! A winning piece for me! Good luck always! love/hugs, LG

Harry Horsman November 24, 2012 at 2:41 PM what a lovely poem,Maria, love the structure and the theme, and the insight in to your world through a lens....