Viewing Life Through a Lens

Walking through a very long way,
                                                  Leads me to a breathtaking scenery,
                                             Flowery trees standing proud by rows,
                                        Gust of wind can ease all my sorrows.

                                   Sun rays peek on thick leaves for effects,
                              Green grasses like beds for us to take a rest,
                         Savor the view and its natural freshness,
                    For it is a new found secret happiness.

               With my magic lens I carried everywhere,
          I captured everything that I cherished forever, 
     Everyday I spent with nature is a great moment,
Life on earth becomes my greatest achievements.

November 25, 2012
For Sandy's Viewing A Life Through Lens
Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 12/9/2012 12:54:00 PM
Unusual form Maria, so true how our cameras extend us into a different world, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2012 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Maria. Love Carol
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Date: 12/5/2012 4:43:00 PM
Hey I see you got a win too my friend!! Good job I like your poem
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Date: 12/3/2012 7:21:00 PM
congrats on your win Maria
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Date: 12/3/2012 6:12:00 PM
Maria. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda
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Date: 12/3/2012 4:28:00 PM
Congrats :-) Sandy
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:44:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem today. Every day in nature is a great moment. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 11/26/2012 2:50:00 PM
Lovely one, Maria. SUre enjoyed the formatting of the stanzas!
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Date: 11/25/2012 5:08:00 PM
Now I'm glad I logged back on to read this masterpiece. Well don my dear sweet poet. Hugs Michael
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:27:00 AM
Superbly beautiful poem with its form my dear friend! I love it! A winning piece for me! Good luck always! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 11/24/2012 2:41:00 PM
what a lovely poem,Maria, love the structure and the theme, and the insight in to your world through a lens....
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