View from the Park Bench

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Date written: 01/11/2025

picnicking twosome white butterfly flits across ~ pigeons coo nearby roughhousing children rustling trees in the distance ~ woman walking dog

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Tom Woody

Date: 1/12/2025 6:15:00 AM

Peaceful scenes in your twin haikus. My wife and I spend a lot of time at the park walking, watching, chatting with folks we meet

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/12/2025 2:35:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tom:-) Some weekends my wife and I spend time in the park doing the same things, too. Time well-spent, for sure.