View From My Porch

Weeping willow 'lone
Hummingbirds refuse to land
On its longing dew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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R Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 1:48 AM
You've captured a beautiful picture with your sweet words! Great writing!Kisses, Emily
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:58 PM
Ok, almost time for me to finally leave here. I end off with your beautiful weeping willow.Luv,Andrea
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Nice images employed from the porch
Falotico Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Well written .... very enjoyed
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Great nature write...The Hummingbirds just don't know what they are missing...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Richards Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:20 PM
Lovely....!! I can sit on my porch too, and watch the birds dip and flutter their wings in the birdbath down below. Nothing can bring a sense of peace more than such a lovely sight!!
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May 30, 2010 at 4:03 PM
NICELY WRITTEN, ENOYED
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