View From a Hotel Window

Someone is standing out under the street lamp
The lights in the city are turned off, but one
And as I sit watching his actions in pity
I wonder if he's just awaiting the sun?

I wish he would come up and share a cup with me
Until the dawn breaks the shadow of night
Then he could experience friendship in comfort
And know that humanity treated him right.

He's digging through trashcans and scouring the gutter
For change that has fallen from off of the curb
And as he walks slowly he silently mutters
"This isn't the life that I want or deserve."

I can't help but ponder as I watch him and wonder
How he ever got to this place in his life?
Is this a result of society's blunder
Or this their idea of 'treating him right?"

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Date: 2/23/2022 5:03:00 PM
similarity hasn't escape, poignant and real weird that here these scenes are almost normal. you have tug a heart string Gayle. nice write
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Date: 2/21/2022 3:43:00 PM
I immediately thought of my son who sat at his window often and spoke of things he saw in the night. I feel you must have really seen this poor soul...I know because I too feel the same way in my writes. Thankyou for sharing.
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Date: 5/1/2018 8:00:00 AM
A people watchers poem for sure. Well done and fun to try to figure out why people do what they do or why they are at a certain station in life.
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Date: 3/13/2017 11:19:00 PM
Interesting poem very nicely done
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/15/2017 9:33:00 PM
Thx Robert. It's just an observation I guess??
Date: 3/12/2017 9:27:00 AM
A lovely gentle thoughtful write Gayle, enjoyed xomo
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/12/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words :)
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