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VIEW FROM A CHEAP MOTEL

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ peach pit spat on cracked asphalt~ abandoned payphone hums, one dime short of salvation.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 1:01 PM
delightful ~ charming
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. How was the bathroom. Immaculate, I'm sure. lol. Love it. Ya get what ya pay for, ya know...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 6:08 PM
nope, not immaculate.....there are quite a few of those cheap motels between Dallas and El Paso....my husband had an uncanny skill for finding them.
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:07 AM
Cleverly expressed
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 3:50 PM
many thanks for your kind words
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