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You think I don't see you from where I stand, But I see you, I can hear you, I breathe you in, The intoxicating rush of being forever yours, The insanity that drives us together, Giving up reality for each other, No one can stand our 5 senses, But can always see our 6th, The love for no others, Shown on our covers.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/15/2011 6:13:00 PM

Lovely expressions quite creative, Ashlee

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/15/2011 6:29:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry soup. Nice read. Lee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/15/2011 4:08:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ashlee. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2011 10:53:00 PM

well enjoyed,..and yes sometimes we can see more than we need to... but as you say./// shown on our covers~ reveals it all,,,, have a nice blessed day,..Linda

Jeff Sampica

Date: 7/14/2011 10:29:00 PM

A sixth sense indeed. Great piece before bed for myself, thank you.