Viennas Crocodile Tears

city fellas dey come to the bush, the Crocodile barks from his moosh,(mouth) they think they smart feller, fool ole yella, more meat says the croc, n goes woosh, death roll in the donga, no more linger longer, don't come to his table, coroners label, says eaten by croc, butt n toosh... thank you Vienna Bombardieri... Don Johnson
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Treetop Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 3:45 PM
mate very clever as always! Lizzie
Horsman Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 3:20 PM
townies were never any good in the bush. enjoyed this Don. harry
Johnson Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 3:43 PM
thats what most the country people say.
Breidenthal Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Very nice one!! Always, Laura
Maverick Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 9:47 AM
Good one Jonno..!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 8:34 PM
well, I knew Vienna was inspiring but wow, she also inspires a crocodile poem. Love that butt n toosh line!! Cool read, Don.
Sivey Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Ha ha! That is a great poem my friend! Eaten in the toosh, whoops! Talking about some pain in the butt!! We may not have the crocodile here but we have similar alligators! I know they aren't the same, but the fear of them is equal...I'm terrified of them both!! Awesome Work with this poem Don!!
Lewis Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 5:50 PM
RUBBISH
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 5:44 PM
you have to see Viennas Crocodile tears , hey:)
Northeast Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 5:39 PM
Well done Don you did that great justice, Bren : )
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 5:45 PM
yes too many get eaten by crocs, at croc mcdonalds....
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