Victory Vigil

He paces the floor
Waiting for a word
But the silence is deafening
Only his anxiety being heard

What is to come
What will be of this world
Who in their right mind
Would have a warrior be a girl

....a man...it's gotta be a man...

False prophets speak of events
Circumstance come and go with the wind
No one is speaking of hope
Just everything coming to a fiery end

Wait a minute...
I'm sure His book says...contradiction
Who can make sense out of
Blathering prophecy disguised as prediction

....women are the problem....yes...indeed

Men are straight forward
Without manipulation and bending to fit
Men don't argue and moan
They take what they get

We were doing fine
Til women were given a voice
No one wants to hear about
The right of men to have "secret" choice

....stupid ignorance...just shUT UP ALREADY!!!

The countdown has begun...3...2...WON!!!!

Written by Trudy Schrader on 06-04-2018

Note: This is not autobiographical or even my opinion. Entertain with me for a moment, that the FALL happened, not because the WOMAN wanted to disobey, she simply wanted to be heard. SHEMA means "to hear." There's so much wisdom in that one word, study it, and be amazed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/5/2018 5:40:00 AM
this is so beautifully written through your feeling and expressed really well, we have the same sort of style so feel fre to check some of mine out x
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Trudy Schrader
Date: 6/5/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Daisy, I will check yours out ;)
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