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Victory So Sweet

Fate is but a weakness of a timid spirit gone astray as the child wanders from chores and seeks out play Wanting is never enough to get it done labor for your efforts make it a worthy one Every setback is one step forward accept the facts and burdens shoulder The taste of defeat is bitter but a lesson learned wiser at the task makes victory so sweet to earn Never fear fear let pride subside bless the worthy partner who works side by side And when you achieve it all be grateful and atone charity is a tide a blessing received and shown

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Date: 4/27/2021 6:27:00 PM
WOW! This is a warehouse of wisdom right here.. The instructions come with an active voice (more like from a parent to a child) and the experiences flowing with every line are so relatable and true. You are wise and trust me, I am so glad and grateful stumbling unto this page. What a powerful poem.
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