Victory and Defeat

Victory 
      Triumphant, Engaging
  Thrusting, Achieving, Conquer
  Winter, Summer, Spring, Fall
     Weaken, slumber, failing
          Slowly, Suddenly
                  Defeat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 9, 2016 at 10:32 PM
David, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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September 12, 2013 at 6:38 PM
hello, David wow..wow...I like the way it slithers into the ground with defeat. love this form. I have to say this publicly...this is the best Diamante, I've ever read. thanks. ..linda
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September 12, 2013 at 7:04 PM
I am flattered with such a compliment, Linda! Thank you, sincerely!! To be honest it was the first time I have ever tried this form lol They are fun and so are you! :)
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