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Victory

Hid in a nest of my own Silent and dark, kept alone Remain here since the start The other life, barely a part Walls crack with glimpses of light Eyes adjust, possible end in site A world so vast stretches to the sea Arms expand, finally I am free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/19/2012 11:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed the read of this one, Erin. I imagined a stowaway waiting to get off a ship or someone hidden and watching the sea, waiting to explore it. Lovely.
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Erin S
Date: 10/23/2012 9:34:00 PM
Thank you very much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: 10/19/2012 10:36:00 AM
The power of the sea. The power of being free, once you discover you've had the ability all along. Wonderful lines!
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Date: 10/16/2012 11:40:00 PM
Awesome verse! I loved it! The ending was perfect. Nicely written. :) Always, Laura
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Erin S
Date: 10/23/2012 9:34:00 PM
Thank you very much :)

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