Erin S Poet Rhyme

Victory

Hid in a nest of my own
                                            Silent and dark, kept alone

                                            Remain here since the start
                                            The other life, barely a part

                                        Walls crack with glimpses of light
                                         Eyes adjust, possible end in site

                                       A world so vast stretches to the sea
                                           Arms expand, finally I am free

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Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2012 at 11:32 PM I really enjoyed the read of this one, Erin. I imagined a stowaway waiting to get off a ship or someone hidden and watching the sea, waiting to explore it. Lovely. Erin S October 23, 2012 at 9:34 PM Thank you very much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it

Poet Tacito October 19, 2012 at 10:36 AM The power of the sea. The power of being free, once you discover you've had the ability all along. Wonderful lines!

Laura Breidenthal October 16, 2012 at 11:40 PM Awesome verse! I loved it! The ending was perfect. Nicely written. :) Always, Laura Erin S October 23, 2012 at 9:34 PM Thank you very much :)