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Victorious Ending

Tightening around me, the world seems so frightening, Sensing that fear and heartbreak is routine, really darkening Climbing to heights that we never thought possible, now sinking, Slithering, around every country, continent on this planet, horrifying! Agony, over 2 million people alone die, while the virus is laughing, Beckoning for more to follow, like the Pied Piper his flute playing, Spitting its hateful spew wherever, not fussy, but creating, Heightening statistics, which some people in power kept ignoring! This is a war between good and evil, will the latter come forth unleashing Its despicable wrath, or will good encompass comforting and brightening, This New Year with incredible warmth, peace and love, thus yielding, Not to evil, but to the people on earth, enough is enough, start believing, And be faithful and grateful, God will help us be victorious!

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Date: 1/28/2021 1:21:00 PM
Great uplifting and inspiring ending Jennifer, telling also our present plight but we must hold on that Jesus is still on the throne. Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 1/23/2021 6:00:00 PM
Vividly descriptive of the current state of the world, Jennifer. We must have hope that things will get better. Jennifer
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/26/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Janice you are so right , but I'm trying to be as optimistic as possible - pessimism I have realized, leads to feeling helpless. Be safe my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/23/2021 5:56:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, Most feel like this. However, I am hopeful things will get better. I can't believe this is our “ new “ normal. As always, great poetry, my friend. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/26/2021 9:07:00 AM
No it would be awful if we had to live like this forever, but our enemy unseen virus is very snug on Planet Earth. I wish we could just blast him away or be like 007 and have a spray inside our clothing that we could spray and the virus would show up, and die! If we all did this, the enemy would surely be defeated, we are poets aren't we? So this is my heartfelt fantasy! Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Date: 1/22/2021 12:58:00 PM
Hopefully, this will someday be just a bad memory that we can all learn from. Hope you have a wonderful weekend, Jennifer :)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/26/2021 9:12:00 AM
Thank-you for a very apt comment Angela, - hope you are right. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/22/2021 3:31:00 AM
Well penned on the current situation Jenni... the war between good and evil has always been there...hopes and prayers for the BETTER things to come.. God bless. Have a lovely day dear. Hugs ~ Ani
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/26/2021 9:19:00 AM
Good and evil as you say Ani my friend, has been around forever, and we must become united in our plea to God, but all that seems to be happening is division everywhere around the world. Hugs and blessings Ani, Jenn.
Date: 1/20/2021 2:58:00 PM
People need to come out of the shadows of fear. That's all I will say here. Nicely done, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/26/2021 9:23:00 AM
That is hard for some Andrea, especially the families that have lost family members to Covid. But, yes we should put on our Armour of faith and fight the good fight. Thanks Andrea my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/20/2021 8:40:00 AM
- The corona crisis is far from over, the virus may have come to stay - The future is in our hands, my friend Jenny - But, we must think ahead ... None of us know, but we need to discuss possibilities - We need to plan for the future - We do not get one step further if we just sit and stare at the number that shows the number of deaths due to corona - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2021 5:57:00 AM
Yes... Keep the faith.... This is a wonderful and wonderous write. God bless you always
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Date: 1/20/2021 1:09:00 AM
There's hope that things are easing but we must remain vigilant. Hope you're well Jennifer. Tom
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Date: 1/19/2021 8:35:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … it’s definitely a war against humanity although humans will prevail, but it is certainly a war of attrition and this enemy must be eliminated and it surely will be - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 1/19/2021 6:12:00 PM
Let us hope and pray that this plague will end this year, if not a lot sooner! :) gw
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Date: 1/19/2021 2:03:00 PM
With God All Things ARE POSSIBLE. We will come through this the same way we came through the other illnesses that have plagued us in the past. A fine write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/19/2021 12:35:00 PM
Yes! Thank you for not allowing this piece to wallow in the quagmire of hopelessness concerning this epic pandemic. Hope for a new year of health and a new wealth of too-long-masked smiles is the very thing now required of all of us. Well written piece my friend and fellow poet.
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Date: 1/19/2021 11:42:00 AM
Dear Jennifer, I seem to value each day more and more, as I wait with my human counterparts for an answer, and a cure, that will make our lives normal once again. We need to keep the Faith, especially when times are tough, thank you for sharing your heart felt words, I'm with you on this one. Be brave and strong.
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