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Victims of Love

He felt in love So deep at first She’s much older Twenty years gap Lived in a home Eight years of joy Nine years later Met his young girl He went with her Wife ran after He sang for her “ Victims Of Love” April 7, 2022 2:07pm Exodus 20:14-Thou shall not commit adultery. Poem inspired by a true story from YouTube. The husband sang for her wife through video chat. A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Contest Judged: 4/7/2022 1:12:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand Place: 9 (out of 10)

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Date: 4/14/2022 12:04:00 PM
This is so plaintive Len with the sorrow of choices woven into this footle - a melancholy song that tugs on the heart! Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Happy Easter.
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/30/2022 9:35:00 PM
Belated Thank you my dear friend Sam. Sorry I missed reading this. But my deep appreciation for coming by. Have a blessed day always. Hugs
Date: 4/8/2022 4:29:00 AM
Great footle ont this wonderful theme. Congratulations!
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/11/2022 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Christuraj. God bless.

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