Victim Or Victor

Victim or Victor





My bubbly being sought an end,
the day he lay tranquil, no pretend,

Dark clouds swiftly veiled my rainbow, 
took away the charm and brilliant glow,

The world came crashing, a bruised soul,
As if life with him was the only goal,

Depressed and dejected I wished to die, 
As time ditched with that grieving sigh, 

Till a heavenly heart came to my rescue,
Made me feel I had still left some due,

Struggling amidst wild sea and all strife,
Finally I was through all negatives of life,

Would have been victim, turned victor,
Cherishing fruits of His worldly splendour.





Written Sept 21st, 2016
For contest by Nayda
Inspired by image 
Oops late to enter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:36 AM
He does bring comfort to a heavy troubled heart:) great write as usual Doc.
Raha Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:34 AM
very well written,Doctor.good luck in the contest.
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