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Vicious lies you spread around the village about me
I am unable to defend myself 
Can you live with what you have done
There are those who will listen to your gossip
I am innocent! I did not steal him away from you
My only crime was he preferred my love to yours

One day you may understand why he left you
Regretting those vile words you said about me

Victim or Victor – it’s not our happiness that matters
I did not mean for this to happen
Can't you understand why he choose me over you?
Those many weeks you were on holiday, you left no one to feed him
One day he crept into my home, sat by the fireside and won't leave 
Rest assured I will look after your abandoned pet cat!

Victim or Victor
Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron
09~20~16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/25/2016 4:07:00 PM
A lovely and creative write, Jan. Turned out different to what I initially assumed:) Congratulations on your podium finish in the contest, plus p.o.t.d. Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/15/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Paul:-) I do like to try and have a twist at the end of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/25/2016 9:00:00 AM
Hi Jan, This was such a well written piece. Although I'm late congratulations for getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/25/2016 12:21:00 PM
Many thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/24/2016 7:12:00 AM
Very clever, made me smile:) double congratulations on POTD and win in the contest:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 12:21:00 PM
Many thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2016 5:46:00 PM
I love this Jan! Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured as POTD!
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Date: 9/25/2016 12:21:00 PM
Many thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2016 7:39:00 AM
Fantastically clever!! Loved how this ends, well done Jan!! Warm Regards, Laura.
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Date: 9/23/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2016 4:22:00 AM
Sir truly as like as summary of 'Shrimadbhagvat Geeta'....
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Date: 9/23/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Amit:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 11:57:00 PM
Wonderful write Jan. Such a clever punchline. This poem should win the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/23/2016 4:13:00 AM
I got a 2nd place and was awarded poem of the day so I'm delighted:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 11:30:00 PM
Awesome write!!! Your punch line was great!!! Congrats!.. Jenni
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Date: 9/23/2016 4:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Jenni:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:58:00 AM
Love you Jan. Just thought I would give you a flavour of the old days when a bunch of us were crazy. Love you Jan.
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:59:00 AM
Sure were fun times then Armand:-) love and hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:57:00 AM
A woman has twins, and gives them up for adoption. One of them goes to a family in Egypt and is named 'Amal.' The other goes to a family in Spain, they name him Juan'. Years later; Juan sends a picture of himself to his mum. Upon receiving the picture, she tells her husband that she wished she also had a picture of Amal. Her husband responds, ''But they are twins. If you've seen Juan, you've seen Amal.''
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:58:00 AM
ha ha ha great one:-)
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:57:00 AM
stopppppppppppppp i cant comment without them jumping ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:56:00 AM
Oh wait a minute...I forgot to end with a joke.
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:09:00 AM
Not sure if you've read my beaver poem - beavering about lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:55:00 AM
Got you again! This is absolutely my last comment.Right Jan? Right?
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:10:00 AM
:-) xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thanks so much Carol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:51:00 AM
Got you! I lied that wasn't my last comment. This one is.
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:10:00 AM
lol xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:50:00 AM
Ok that's it I'm going to stop here this is my last comment.
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:10:00 AM
yeah right lol:-) xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:49:00 AM
Remember that time we took you to four pages on one poem. You already had so many comments I wanted you to break the record. Remember that time Jan. Do you? Do You?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/22/2016 10:11:00 AM
I remember it welllll lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:46:00 AM
By the way what's the most comments you ever got from one idiot. Easy answer, since I'm the only idiot here that would be how many I made. Right Jan? Right?
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:11:00 AM
lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:43:00 AM
Speaking of cats... I went to the zoo the other day, there was only one dog in it, it was a shitzu. Right Jan? Right?
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:12:00 AM
My son told me that joke last week lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:39:00 AM
Also a fav, you vixen you. It's those melons of yours...everyone wants them. Right Jan? Right?
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:13:00 AM
oh thanks for reminding me - got a routine mammogram tomorrow - oh squashed boobies day what a treat ... not:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 9:37:00 AM
Yeah, the cat and her husband...right Jan? Right? You didn't mention her husband with the distinguished salt and pepper hair, you know Pierce Bronson. Right Jan?...Right?
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:00:00 AM
Mmmmmm you remember me and my love of greying men lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 8:43:00 AM
WOW!!congrats Jan!
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Date: 9/22/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 8:41:00 AM
Back again, Jan, to congratulate you on a well-deserved Poem Of The Day honor! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:59:00 AM
Sorry Sandra my comments keep jumping thanks to the lovely Armand posting so many lol
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Rick:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 8:15:00 AM
Congrats Jan also good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thanks Rick:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 8:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jan - Hope it will win in the contest also - A great poem who deserve the best ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise I am surprised and delighted:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 7:28:00 AM
Well deserved. I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 9/22/2016 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Janet:-) hugs jan xx
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