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Victim of the System

You're a victim of the system Lost inside the hivemind You're taught to breed before 17 You're forced to be another torch that burns down my walls You must learn all the trends, otherwise you're retarded Victim of the system I don't blame you, I was once in your place, wires in my brain, singing the same lyrics as everyone else, Stuck in the same spotlight for years, A brain injected with anxiety Victim of the system Why do you create chaos, when peace is so close, why do you bring guns to the knife fight, The goverment encourages hospitality, but uses war was a resolve tatic. Victim of the system If I told you, "you're not a rebel, you follow their every command." you would scream the truth out and whisper the lie in, The pain that you cause is clouded by murky waters, You have no voice, except to laugh when others struggle to break free. Victim of the system

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Date: 1/12/2017 12:23:00 AM
I like this..well put!
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Date: 1/11/2017 7:26:00 PM
The world is not only a place to live in but also a place to be victimized by the devil's system.... Let's just keep on obeying the commands of the Lord God...... Nice poem...... Congrats, Skyler+++
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Skyler Mclaughlin
Date: 1/11/2017 8:36:00 PM
....Oh. Well, I'm an atheist sorry dude (haha! Not sorry! God is just like Santa in so many ways, so why should he be real?)not what I was going for exactly. oops, and I'm an anarchist
Date: 10/18/2016 10:51:00 PM
SKYLER, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:29:00 PM
Skyler, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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