Victim

I lay on my bed with my eyes closed, listening to music, without motion, paralyzed before.
I can hear the sound, sound of the rain. Seems like many people are in pain.
My room is dark without a candle. My mind is thinking, thinking about people.
People who are waiting for their loved ones. Are afraid of the anger, anger of a victim.

It’s raining after a long time. Perhaps, someone was bearing the pain for a long time.
Lightning I can see and hear. Perhaps, someone is giving explanations, by crying.
The injustice he faced had severe repercussions.
But still no one cares, everyone has alternatives.

He will calm down one day, consoling himself for life long.
Carrying the thorns inside his heart, 
This will give him pain,
And one day again it will rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Aditya, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:53 PM
ADITYA, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 5:58 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Aditya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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May 7, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Thanks a lot Linda!
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May 7, 2011 at 9:13 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight Aditya .. cleverly created to express your theme luv..
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May 7, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. have fun on P.S. with luv..
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