Victim

I know it's wrong But I can't stop loving you When I know I'm the victim of love

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2010 9:38:00 AM

Interesting Senryu..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Thanks for the information: Govi and Jesse Cook..Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/28/2010 9:08:00 PM

Nice take on "love". Sometimes things are difficult for such "victims" Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2010 2:42:00 PM

good one, Kaila. hey, you need to put a title on your last post. WE are not able to click on it to see it without title. andrea

Sarah Hales

Date: 8/27/2010 8:03:00 AM

oh can relate sarah x

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 8/27/2010 7:32:00 AM

i know how this feels, good poem :) ------Ell