Victim

The alluring eyes of the aggressor,
Blazing with anticipation,
As the victim awaits unknowing,
Slowly she steps closer,
The very senses of her thoughts,
Tingle within the bounds of her mind,
For the smell emulates,
Her pulse quickens,
The strike at any time now,

The victim he sits,
No sense of what is coming,
Unit his breath is gone,
Devoured by her beauty,
And her cunningness,

Sh 06/23/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 16, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Scott,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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June 24, 2010 at 11:16 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Scott. Love, Carol
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June 24, 2010 at 6:47 AM
:)
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June 23, 2010 at 10:08 PM
watch out lol,,, very captivating write, enjoyed...P.D.
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June 23, 2010 at 5:02 PM
OoOoOo intriguing and warped, both could play victim if they want! cool poem
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