Vicious cycle

Life is a vicious cycle of climbing the pyramid scheme and getting to the top
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Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 4:25 PM
Love that clever analogy
Croft Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Thank you
Romios Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Keren, there is always another top.))) Helping others IS the top. All the trulu successful people do not make it alone. More interestingly, only God is at the top. And like sillies we dont realize Dod is at tht top of all we try to outdo him lOL Hugs, Pangie
Croft Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 3:23 PM
That is very true! No one can top God!! Thanks for reading!
Babcock Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:09 AM
It is a vicious cycle if you are trying to get to the top. One I did not want to climb as prefer a peaceful life. love phyl
Croft Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 3:23 PM
I would more peaceful then this rat race. Have a great evening.
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