Vicious cycle

Life is a vicious cycle of climbing the pyramid scheme and getting to the top

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2024 4:25:00 PM

Love that clever analogy

Karen Croft
Date: 5/3/2024 5:36:00 PM

Thank you

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/3/2024 3:49:00 PM

sometimes it does seem like a pyramid scheme...hadn't thought of that.

Karen Croft
Date: 5/3/2024 5:36:00 PM

Yes it does

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/3/2024 1:37:00 PM

Keren, there is always another top.))) Helping others IS the top. All the trulu successful people do not make it alone. More interestingly, only God is at the top. And like sillies we dont realize Dod is at tht top of all we try to outdo him lOL Hugs, Pangie

Karen Croft
Date: 5/3/2024 3:23:00 PM

That is very true! No one can top God!! Thanks for reading!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/3/2024 11:09:00 AM

It is a vicious cycle if you are trying to get to the top. One I did not want to climb as prefer a peaceful life. love phyl

Karen Croft
Date: 5/3/2024 3:23:00 PM

I would more peaceful then this rat race. Have a great evening.