Marilene Evans Poet Verse

Vices

VICES

Various types, kinds of
vices are destructive,
very bad.  The person’s
views are changed, distorted, 
virtues warped, life becomes
vicious cycle and dreams
vanish in the thin air.  


5/5/21       Pleiades V Poetry
                 Kim Merryman

Checked:   How Many Syllables

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Kim Rodrigues May 9, 2021 at 6:56 PM Congratulations! Marilene Evans May 9, 2021 at 7:11 PM Thanks so much, Kim. Have a good evening.

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2021 at 4:16 PM well done and congratulations Marilene Evans May 9, 2021 at 4:43 PM Thank you, Andrea. Happy Mother's Day. Enjoy the rest of your day.

Joseph May May 8, 2021 at 4:08 PM So true Marilene, Congrats on your win Marilene Evans May 8, 2021 at 4:14 PM Thanks, so much, Joseph. Have a good week-end.

Kim Merryman May 8, 2021 at 11:28 AM I like the way you described how vices change a person. Well done! Congrats on your win, Marilene! Blessings, Kim M Marilene Evans May 8, 2021 at 12:21 PM Thank you. Thank you, Kim. My second husband was an alcoholic, so sweet and kind; but when he was binging, he forgot his family, so I had to say goodbye.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2021 at 11:27 AM - One of my favorites, Marilene :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Marilene Evans May 8, 2021 at 12:17 PM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Have a great week-end.

Christuraj Alex May 7, 2021 at 11:39 PM Congratulations! Marilene Evans May 8, 2021 at 8:47 AM Thank you, Christuraj. Have a great day.