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Vice Versas Impasse

Embarking upon another vigilant journey, as ever searching these Sinuous corridores in sublime; a maxims inverted souvenir; effusions Waterfalls of wisdom to contest this, their mortuaries enigma.... Craven images incised within marble stones strewn amid the roguery Of a silent night; rustic crossing the cold damp earth; its wilted flowers Unto the mausoleums seminal door; twilights prophet speaking now in ******************************************************** ...."Summations Rhymes * 'Vice Versas Impasse?!'" ~

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/31/2022 6:41:00 PM

If only a twilight prophet could speak again.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/23/2021 3:01:00 PM

Have a Blessed Christmas.

Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 3:39:00 PM

What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/4/2013 1:24:00 AM

i miss your poetry john..wish you could write again...Charma

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/13/2013 2:24:00 PM

Dear John, long time no see. now you've got me thinkingof how to use the word mortuary in one of my pieces. you have an endless vocabulary.

Cindy Cayton

Date: 12/26/2012 1:27:00 PM

Nice expression of your views. Well written as always. Enjoyed your voice today. Take care, God bless you and keep you safe through the new coming year, Cyndy

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/9/2012 3:52:00 PM

an adventure so surreal..(: you can't help but look forward to it changing your life in a positive way. life is a journey. beautiful write, John. Take care ^_^ ~Always&Forever Lynette

Helen Murray

Date: 9/4/2012 4:52:00 PM

'Craven images incised within marble stones strewn amid the roguery Of a silent night.' Loved those lines.

Loo Roll

Date: 8/24/2012 3:42:00 PM

interesting

Julie Cottingham

Date: 8/15/2012 7:31:00 PM

You have a continual and elegant pen my dear friend, and your words have been dearly missed, I have been absent sometime but finally found my way home, remain ever safe and ever blessed, Julie

Cindy Cayton

Date: 6/27/2012 1:06:00 PM

It has been awhile since we've talked for hours messaging. Like once. I know you are very busy, and I hope you take your time, and get all the rest that you need, in compassion I say, man this place is stressful. How is your physical health. Stress ages ya don't it? no worry, please feel free and browse forever love. ~ I think you will agree. Take good care and God bless~ Love, Lucinda

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/24/2012 2:19:00 PM

It's been awhile John...Hope you're doing well, and writing more of your remarkable verses! Your B'day is coming up soon, right!? I'll be here now and then and will remember to holla at you come the day! Take care of yourself my friend....take one day at a time and remember He loves you just like He said..no matter what! I just posted a couple of poems...it's been months! One's "Essential Things" and the other's "Essence of Summer". Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2012 10:37:00 PM

where are u John luv.. hope all is well.. miss your wonderful writes luv..

Date: 6/17/2012 12:19:00 PM

..."HI BABY, 'YOU LOOK BEAUTIFUL.'" *

The Situation

Date: 6/9/2012 7:18:00 PM

wonder what the devils up to?

Diane Christian

Date: 6/5/2012 6:31:00 AM

aw lovley hope you are ok John, miss you lots, hope all is well may God bless you and keep you saf all my love from diane xxx

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/4/2012 10:20:00 AM

I like the waterfalls of wisom - couold use some of that now.

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/27/2012 9:15:00 PM

Sounds like traveling to an ancient time or corrodor....enjoyed your imagery !!

Diane Christian

Date: 5/25/2012 6:16:00 AM

a beautiful poem, hope all is well dear God bles you all my love from diane xxxx

James Peranteau

Date: 5/24/2012 8:24:00 AM

The picture is clear, and a journey worth taking(reading your write) dear poet ! Awesome, to say the least ! Have a wonderful creative week John ! Much love, james

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/20/2012 10:17:00 AM

Our journeys go in so many different directions, I should travel this one with you John, it sounds wonderful. Luv, Lizzie

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/18/2012 4:02:00 AM

Love you work indeed John!!!