Vicarious daydream

Toying with the summer breeze.
Free... not a care in the world.
Falcon circling among the clouds.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:05 PM
the middle line is so awesome!! toying with the wind!
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea, for your lovely visit and comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Love.
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Thanks, Maureen. Love your visits and comments.
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