Vicarious

Vicarious

Self instructed eyes, bend in to see,
The gorged mouths themselves, with the spending.
Words "I'm here to watch your nth" heard,
"Bring my relief exchange my life with ease."

Forth as if I'm at minus, segregated by hearts unfavoringly,
Turn us through chapters, illusion filled critisizingly,
Thickening colors suffocate the proverbial head frequency.

The stress-belief instilled acronymic letters to your name.
Starting with crucial anonymity.
Broken in personification you throw depth in molding,
Away connect why we set the world's continual motion.

The star welded together takes what's ripe,
And burnt the eyes with dark loathsome nights.
The exclusion sent the shine filling this fain,
"From many in deep days lets lay it free."

I feel the light shared and iridescented us,
Has lit and'll fuel the hole that burns between you and me.
With these now-emotions, I listen like always,
And the pencil sits aside-head in a violent shake,
'Til time has passed the ash willed left, and feels like peace'd evade.

The sky is drinking the earth dry saying "love is betray,"
To hunger tree's barely piece'd together by age.
React-fully the hands clench,
Blind hands see love as the same weight as rage,
Under and over these emotions vicariously live tethered.
Inclosed under it always people deserved blame,
Wrapped the surface some letter some name,
Loose words quote full years in bark,
"You're a living projection of my pain."

Deed me and lift the horizon up with clouds of fire..
Burn it expending till tired,
Will it till you lost respect while reaching loft vain desire..
Watch how I promised it's the timed descending spiral,
I pioneer instant loss of degraders, keep my brother emoters,
And realign beautiful hearts so it pours out water.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/27/2011 12:43:00 PM
Creative and interersting thoughts expressed on vicarious, Josh
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