Vibrant Love Verse

How heavenly was your love,
As innocent and pure as a dove,
It was quite late that I realised,
Living without you was at such a price !

You were running red into my veins,
Holding my heart's thumping reins,
An all time interminable thought,
As if nature intrigued some plot !

Twilights of my mornings were bright,
Vibrant thoughts had no lonesome fight,
Appreciating His amazing ways,
You were absolutely my only craze !

If I had not taken you for granted,
Colours in life would have been enchanting,
Rainbow evanesced, as if after sunshine,
You could be my only addicting red wine !

A seaweed beyond reach of a wave,
Makes every bit of the heart to crave,
Love can die of truth as friendship of a lie,
Tipped with gold, comes as a butterfly !



Written on 29/7/14
For contest- Vibrant verse
By Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Palmer Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 6:47 AM
lovely,best wishes in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Good to see you again tonight,. Dr. Upma, I sure liked that gold tipped butterfly at the end of this one. sweet touch!!
Lindley Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:02 AM
So very vibrant my friend.. Absolutely brilliant ending stanza! " A seaweed beyond reach of a wave, Makes every bit of the heart to crave, Love can die of truth as friendship of a lie, Tipped with gold, comes as a butterfly !" Best of luck in the contest...
Smith Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Heartfelt but so full of color and vibrancies...hugs Tim
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