Vibrant Emptiness

moistened eyes, dew drops swallowed
pain that tugged bleeding heart plugged
bliss beats led us and we followed
surfing suffering soul shrugged

no one sees unreleased sneeze 
wide awake, nothing at stake
the stoic soul aims not to please
divine entwined, for love’s sake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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October 9, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Woah, the alliteration and rhymes in this piece are really captivating and the lines reflect myriad depth.. Beautifully woven!
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October 9, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Hiya ~ delighted you enjoyed
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October 8, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Letting the soul take control, is a duty for the few... Inspiring!
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October 8, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, Jose
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October 8, 2023 at 6:20 AM
Nice rhymes... Really like that first line. Great imagery.
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October 8, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Thank you!
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