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Vibrant Emptiness

moistened eyes, dew drops swallowed pain that tugged bleeding heart plugged bliss beats led us and we followed surfing suffering soul shrugged no one sees unreleased sneeze wide awake, nothing at stake the stoic soul aims not to please divine entwined, for love’s sake

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Date: 10/9/2023 4:20:00 AM
Woah, the alliteration and rhymes in this piece are really captivating and the lines reflect myriad depth.. Beautifully woven!
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Date: 10/9/2023 5:38:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya ~ delighted you enjoyed
Date: 10/8/2023 9:07:00 AM
Letting the soul take control, is a duty for the few... Inspiring!
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Date: 10/8/2023 9:20:00 AM
Thank you, Jose
Date: 10/8/2023 6:20:00 AM
Nice rhymes... Really like that first line. Great imagery.
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Date: 10/8/2023 6:32:00 AM
Thank you!

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