Vibrant Emptiness
moistened eyes, dew drops swallowed
pain that tugged bleeding heart plugged
bliss beats led us and we followed
surfing suffering soul shrugged
no one sees unreleased sneeze
wide awake, nothing at stake
the stoic soul aims not to please
divine entwined, for love’s sake
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