Vibrant Blue

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Dramatic skies of blue-gray clouds, Before the rains that evening shrouds. Fresh blueberries, forget me nots, Bracing waves when the weather's hot! Twilight bluejay, in search of night, Prancing peacock, vanity's delight! The earth itself, and also Neptune, Ripe juicy grapes of morning June. Great whales within the matching sea, The melancholy of smaller tragedy, Hyacinths and plums of sunshine cheer, And roses fragrant when you are near!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/9/2020 5:02:00 PM

This came up on the sidebar of my screen, and now it's going right into my FAVES, Evelyn. What a breath of fresh air! Splendid imagery and rhyme. Thanks, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/9/2020 6:19:00 PM

You are quite welcome, and you certainly have my gratitude for your spirit lifting remarks, Gershon. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this poem and I'm so happy it's in your FAVES. Have a nice evening, my friend.

Silent One

Date: 8/2/2020 1:45:00 PM

This would have been perfect for my flowers contest ... Great descriptive writing..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you very much. Your words lift me up. I didn't know about your flowers contest. If I had, I would've entered. Guess I missed it. :(

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/1/2020 10:32:00 PM

I have enjoyed your imagery and visualizing these blue acts of nature.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2020 8:30:00 AM

I'm awfully glad you did. Thank you so much.