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Vibrant Aloneness

The fire of my soul
has burnt to dust desire
I now play my life role 
with nothing to aspire

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Energy gridlines brighten
as bliss currents cascade
Feeling load on heart lighten
into the vast void I wade

Alone

16-August-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buhagiar Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 1:36 AM
Sad poems seem to be ever popular. I like them too.
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August 16, 2022 at 1:40 AM
Far from sad, Victor, it’s joyful, blissful and yet this journey we each must take alone
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