Via of Umbra Interfixus Per Lux Lucis

this is the way out
but where does it lead
to a path untaken
to a path unseen
to risk and try
to rely on fate
it is a chance we all must take

you wish to leave
so you fall behind
lost in a crowd of brainless minds
fallow blind 
or choose to see
the path untaken
the path unseen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horsman Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 10:47 PM
enjoyed this Rachel, with poetry like this, you'll do ok on the path into the future. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 5:02 PM
The path untaken the path unseen, nice expressions, rachel
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