Vexation

Im trying
while hes lying
hes crying
while im dying
feelings are changing
and old ones are comming back
which makes up for all this stuff that i lack
just trying to find the strenth
to get through one more day
building up inside
this hurtings here to stay


-Spencer Coggsdale   dedicated to Brandon Castillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Chappell Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:16 PM
wow this is very strong in my minds thoughts
Alcorn Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 8:17 PM
how heartbreakingly beautiful! Wonderful write and dedication!
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