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Veteran Code

Veterans helping veterans That’s how the code goes For there are certain things Only a fellow veteran knows. On the local radio news The newsreader had said A man was attacked And been found dead. He didn't wear specs yet A pair perched on his nose. I said good morning to him Why are you wearing those. He took them off muttering From a bloke I killed last night And before I could react He was gone out of sight, Away through the door. I thought how absurd I though that I really Must have misheard. Checked with Police Thought it best But they’d already Made a valid arrest. He came back that night Getting on for quite late, Said he couldn’t cope Was going to self immolate, Could he borrow money to Fill his empty petrol can, Just twenty four and a Four tour Afghan Veteran. We called the police who Spared him the Hell Of locking him up In a cold Police cell. Had him sectioned, Taken into proper care, Qualified people to Look after him there. He’s fully recovered now With a child and loving wife Seems to have settled down To a stable and normal life. If I see him these days He doesn’t greet or speak, Says I betrayed his trust That long ago fateful week. I was hurt at first But pleased we won For he’s still alive So good job done. Veterans helping veterans That’s how the code goes For there are certain things Only a fellow veteran knows

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Date: 4/6/2023 1:46:00 PM
a powerful and very touching story, terry! it's too bad he doesn't give you credit for helping him get another chance at life (which he fortunately took advantage of), but at least you know you did what you had to do...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/6/2023 4:37:00 PM
Thanks ilene. The important thing was the team saved him - I just happened to be in charge thst day. It was a good outcome.
Date: 4/6/2023 12:27:00 PM
Great penning Terry, with lovely rhyme and flow throughout. This story is told extremely well with real insightfulness. Have a great Easter, Gordon
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/6/2023 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Gordon.
Date: 4/6/2023 11:53:00 AM
Its surprising he still holds a grudge seeing his life turned out well, you did the right thing and were rewarded by seeing him have a happy life, but his scorn for you after all these years goes to show the two of these are true. Veterans helping Veterans AND no good deed goes unpunished. A good poem Terry, Enjoyed.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/6/2023 4:34:00 PM
We’d seen his mental state deteriorating over the weeks until this final incident. We don’t believe he remembered what he’d done, just found himself in a Secure Mental Health Centre. I just happened to be Centre Manager that day so he obviously blamed me for his being locked up. We were just pleased that it helped him. Nothing else mattered

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