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Veteran Code

Veterans helping veterans
That’s how the code goes
For there are certain things
Only a fellow veteran knows.
On the local radio news
The newsreader had said
A man was attacked
And been found dead.

He didn't wear specs yet 
A pair perched on his nose.
I said good morning to him
Why are you wearing those.
He took them off muttering
From a bloke I killed last night
And before I could react
He was gone out of sight,

Away through the door. 
I thought how absurd
I though that I really
Must have misheard.
Checked with Police
Thought it best
But they’d already
Made a valid arrest.

He came back that night
Getting on for quite late,
Said he couldn’t cope 
Was going to self immolate,
Could he borrow money to
Fill his empty petrol can,
Just twenty four and a
Four tour Afghan Veteran.

We called the police who
Spared him the Hell
Of locking him up 
In a cold Police cell.
Had him sectioned,
Taken into proper care,
Qualified people to 
Look after him there.

He’s fully recovered now
With a child and loving wife
Seems to have settled down
To a stable and normal life.
If I see him these days 
He doesn’t greet or speak,
Says I betrayed his trust
That long ago fateful week.

I was hurt at first
But pleased we won
For he’s still alive
So good job done.
Veterans helping veterans
That’s how the code goes
For there are certain things 
Only a fellow veteran knows

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Date: 4/6/2023 1:46:00 PM
a powerful and very touching story, terry! it's too bad he doesn't give you credit for helping him get another chance at life (which he fortunately took advantage of), but at least you know you did what you had to do...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/6/2023 4:37:00 PM
Thanks ilene. The important thing was the team saved him - I just happened to be in charge thst day. It was a good outcome.
Date: 4/6/2023 12:27:00 PM
Great penning Terry, with lovely rhyme and flow throughout. This story is told extremely well with real insightfulness. Have a great Easter, Gordon
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/6/2023 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Gordon.
Date: 4/6/2023 11:53:00 AM
Its surprising he still holds a grudge seeing his life turned out well, you did the right thing and were rewarded by seeing him have a happy life, but his scorn for you after all these years goes to show the two of these are true. Veterans helping Veterans AND no good deed goes unpunished. A good poem Terry, Enjoyed.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 4/6/2023 4:34:00 PM
We’d seen his mental state deteriorating over the weeks until this final incident. We don’t believe he remembered what he’d done, just found himself in a Secure Mental Health Centre. I just happened to be Centre Manager that day so he obviously blamed me for his being locked up. We were just pleased that it helped him. Nothing else mattered

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