Vestige of the Sky

Racing projectile,

High velocity impact:

Surface impression.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 11:53 PM
Raul, you have so many haiku here. One day I hope to see them all. Luv, Andrea
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February 28, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Soup mail (and regular email). The photo is not posted on the web. It's on my computer's "My Photos" folder.
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February 28, 2010 at 6:57 PM
Raul, how do you post a photo when sponsoring a contest? I can't seem to do it. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Raul..thankxx for your wonderful comments tonight .. have u read "Appreciation" by Marty Owens.. as yt?.. its for u .. luv.. Linda-Marie
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 2:53 PM
U covered it all Raul.. a great Haiku full of description and interesting aspect of the meteor... thankxxx for another great Haiku from u... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Great description of a meteor, Raul! Love, Carolyn
Chircop Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Good racing Haiku..--C harma
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Interesting ideas present in this Haiku. I especially like the second line. Sara
Dufresne Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Cool high action Haiku Raul! I really enjoyed Ruben's take on your poem here --Robert
Palli Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 5:41 AM
good one!
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