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Vestige of the Sky

Racing projectile, High velocity impact: Surface impression.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2010 11:53:00 PM

Raul, you have so many haiku here. One day I hope to see them all. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 7:15:00 PM

Soup mail (and regular email). The photo is not posted on the web. It's on my computer's "My Photos" folder.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 6:57:00 PM

Raul, how do you post a photo when sponsoring a contest? I can't seem to do it. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 3:33:00 PM

Raul..thankxx for your wonderful comments tonight .. have u read "Appreciation" by Marty Owens.. as yt?.. its for u .. luv.. Linda-Marie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 2:53:00 PM

U covered it all Raul.. a great Haiku full of description and interesting aspect of the meteor... thankxxx for another great Haiku from u... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 9:46:00 AM

Great description of a meteor, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/28/2010 6:37:00 AM

Good racing Haiku..--C harma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2010 6:26:00 AM

Interesting ideas present in this Haiku. I especially like the second line. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/28/2010 6:00:00 AM

Cool high action Haiku Raul! I really enjoyed Ruben's take on your poem here --Robert

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 5:41:00 AM

good one!