Vessel of Morning

A claret mare,
slips through the lightless fields…
do I follow or does it follow me?

Milkweed drifts in the wind,
its intricacies caught in silence,
severed from any place of root or home,
do they know where they belong?

I drift, catatonic,
pulled toward a vague horizon
as if some austere hand grants favor -
or am I only imagining it?

Branches bow with dew,
a vessel of morning
in which the world seems briefly paused,
or is it always this still,
and I too blind to see?

Cherry blossoms, pale against gray…
hang like thoughts too fragile to speak.
I breathe.
The mare canters on,
and I, silent,
melt into the passing haze,
wondering if I will ever know
what carries me forward.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 8:48 PM
Clear to me, anyway. Your heart carries you forward. ~ Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 5:53 PM
engaging poem, Rowena. This poem spoke to me, especially 'wonderingif I will ever know what carries me forward.
Velasco Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:49 AM
Thank you. That line comes from a place of wondering and hoping (-:
Cornish Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Rowena, you are truly a skilled poet, and know how to "show" emotion---and this, like a Netflix episode, invites one to follow - entices one to follow! Isn't it true that so very often we'll never truly know---but then, the greyhound that catches the rabbit can never race again?
Velasco Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:47 AM
Thank you! Indeed, sometimes we chase things we can never truly hold. I’m glad my poem could reach you.
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