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Vessel of Earth

Clay anatomy, Ceramic arms embracing: The cut of the day.

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 1/1/2010 10:51:00 PM

a very interesting senryu,written with style of which shows so much with few words and i want to Thank you for holding contests and for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..cecil

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/1/2010 3:24:00 PM

enjoyed reading, today

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/1/2010 8:32:00 AM

Clever and interesting challenge! ... I will be looking for Ruben's challenge next...the translucent/crystal vase! Well done!~ Love, Carrie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/1/2010 7:26:00 AM

Interesting Molding Raul..still understanding

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2010 5:06:00 AM

There are common vessels for common use and there are uncommon vessels for uncommon use. This sounds like the uncommon. Sara