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Vessel of Earth

Clay anatomy,
Ceramic arms embracing:
The cut of the day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hickman Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 10:51 PM
a very interesting senryu,written with style of which shows so much with few words and i want to Thank you for holding contests and for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..cecil
Culverhouse Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 3:24 PM
enjoyed reading, today
Richards Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Clever and interesting challenge! ... I will be looking for Ruben's challenge next...the translucent/crystal vase! Well done!~ Love, Carrie
Chircop Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Interesting Molding Raul..still understanding
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 5:06 AM
There are common vessels for common use and there are uncommon vessels for uncommon use. This sounds like the uncommon. Sara
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