Very Sad

I don't know why our world is going to die air is in suffocation light is in pollution water is in constipation suffering from optical illusion man's ears eat nose drinks and eyes talk No argument God will brook

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2013 7:32:00 AM

- Very well written, but very, very sad bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/5/2013 11:55:00 AM

Many thanks always for your comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2013 8:17:00 PM

I wish all the pollution, would stop... a sad verse... xox~ AMRI

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2013 9:21:00 AM

A lot of thanks to you, loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2013 3:30:00 PM

yes, it is so sad indeed, BL!! you summed it up well.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/3/2013 9:21:00 AM

A lot of thanks to you, loved always, bl