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Very Pure

Veneer of ebon rancor time had spread on my life Even more opaque it was made by smear of strife Rinsed by the edifying shower of divine grace Year on year, I restored my heart’s crystal face. Pristine humane emotions now transparently flow Under pellucid layer of my mind radiant ethos glows Rays reach you all the glimmer of love at nightfall Embark on the last journey at sated soul’s blissful call. January 21, 2020 Contest : What's In A Name Sponsor : Juliet Ligon

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Date: 2/2/2020 10:40:00 PM
Great acrostic, Subimal, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/1/2020 7:18:00 AM
Lovely poem, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/29/2020 10:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, rhyme, and flow. Congrats on your top placement in my contest!
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Date: 1/28/2020 11:00:00 PM
Wow.. Sheer poetry.. Great win in the contest..
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