Very Pure

Veneer of ebon rancor time had spread on my life
Even more opaque it was made by smear of strife
Rinsed by the edifying shower of divine grace
Year on year, I restored my heart’s crystal face.

Pristine humane emotions now transparently flow
Under pellucid layer of my mind radiant ethos glows
Rays reach you all the glimmer of love at nightfall
Embark on the last journey at sated soul’s blissful call.

January 21, 2020
Contest : What's In A Name
Sponsor : Juliet Ligon
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Roper Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 10:40 PM
Great acrostic, Subimal, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Lovely poem, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
Ligon Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 10:56 PM
Beautiful imagery, rhyme, and flow. Congrats on your top placement in my contest!
Somadas Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 11:00 PM
Wow.. Sheer poetry.. Great win in the contest..
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