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Very near, yet so far

Amid the mighty waves of peculiar sea I stood still waiting for you to see me You took hold of the little girl's shivering hand And made her dance among the waves away from the shore sand I remained silent, building a sand castle, Collecting shells and was finally worn to a frazzle. I noticed your footsteps and felt your breath With divine love, I walked to you with a pearl wreath. You caught hold of my hand and played with my finger At once, the mighty wave greeted my heart with new zinger It's the joy Eye-kissing joy Heart sweetening joy You are here beside me Very near, yet so far.

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Date: 5/21/2019 2:33:00 PM
Quite a beautiful moment in time you've penned.
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Date: 5/19/2019 2:41:00 AM
WOW Swetha - beautifully penned and your imagination soars in this poem. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/17/2019 11:37:00 AM
I liked the suspense at the end.
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Date: 5/17/2019 8:17:00 AM
I have added you to a list of poets I follow. You had me at your first poem.
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Date: 5/14/2019 9:00:00 PM
Joy! Joy to you and to the world, Swetha. Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 5/10/2019 1:20:00 PM
Enjoyed your verse Swetha. Love the imagery. Tom
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 5/11/2019 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Tom :)