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Be optimistic rather than fatalistic. Don't squander and be elated hedonistic. Retain moving; only the obdurate survive. Hand jives your way to contrive. Slump or solidity must be omitted. Wear awe mood when having moved. Don't be shy in taking elitism. Self-reliance is a wedge of realism.

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/28/2021 7:31:00 AM

Nice one Lasaad…Delice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2021 5:36:00 AM

Uplifting words, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/28/2021 6:56:00 AM

Thanks for your precious comment, Vijay, enjoy your weekend

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2021 1:48:00 AM

You sound like Polonius in the play Hamlet. Great advice.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/28/2021 4:52:00 AM

Oh, Thank you, that's an honor I can't claim to have, I never considered Polonius when composing this poem, but I should have because he has fantastic advice." Brevity is the soul of wit."

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2021 2:49:00 PM

Like that first line! A good reminder!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 3:09:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim, for your kindness. Blessings

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/27/2021 1:46:00 PM

Descriptive of nature, survival of the fittest, descriptive of humanity, now survival of the cleverest, wonderful thought provoking write Lasaad, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 3:08:00 PM

David, thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoy this poem, and my promise is to never stop writing because your comments are so encouraging to me and mean so much. Take care, my friend, and have a wonderful weekend.