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Vermillion Bridge

one cold day in december the one day that i will always remember Cold, broken and frozzen on the side I cant help but wonder what was going though her mine At first sight i was speachless, nothing to say and this was the only time i toled myself that i needed to pray With the unknown knockin at my feet there was noway i was gonna fine my seat I couldnt grab ahold of what actualy went down For that breif moment my world had stop spinnin around Just imganing how things could of ended the rest of my life i would of predented This is were your visions starts to clear your ears open up and you start to hear Eyes widen and you start to tear What just happended has convered every single fear We all have our fate and there is a time but this wasnt yours, your fate is of a diffrent kind

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Date: 2/19/2011 10:45:00 AM
thank you means alot :)
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Date: 2/19/2011 2:09:00 AM
I loved it, especially the two last verses.
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:08:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Chris. I am sorry for being late to welcome you to the site. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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