Venus

Your infernal far fleeting light affairs
attracts so many earthly lonely stares!
Goddess of love a moon you still do lack
a Lonely travel seems for you a fact 

-The planet is one of the few in our solar system that has no moon..ironic?-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 5:40 PM
You writing about your crazy Irish friend again? What were those four letters James?? Remind me. My daughter is here to explain
Murray Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 4:54 AM
It was only in later life I copped on what he meant.
Murray Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 4:53 AM
Just seeing this now James. When I was a teenager, My Dad used comment that I needed a rub of the relic.
James Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Explaining is not what you need my friend...:)
Smith Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:30 PM
A very deep piece James..it carries me away
James Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Tim ..good.
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