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Venus

Venus L ifted, on friendship’s wings, I sail across troubled waters; V anqiushed sorrows no longer lay captive, E ntwined forever, in my tortured soul. L yrics, your heart sings to me A rise from the ashes U nder the clouds, to set me free. G azing upon my new H orizon, happiness I thought was L ost, blooms brilliant, like birds O f paradise, everywhere I look. V enus, together, we will travel E ternity, forever in love. 07/11/10 9:16 pm For Tirzah's Contest

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Date: 12/12/2016 4:24:00 PM
Good to read this well put together write James, here's wishing the seasons best.'
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Date: 7/16/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Tirzah Conway's contest "Live,Laugh,Love" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2010 9:04:00 AM
I enjoyed this one. It kept my attention with its brevity and was very fun reading. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2010 3:53:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your HM in Tirzah's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem full of great sentiments in every line... enjoy your special honor my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2010 12:41:00 PM
My congratulations to you Jimbo on this excellent Acrostic containing uplifting and inspirational messages for all. Sincerely hope that all is well, my friend. God bless. Love, Audrey
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:48:00 PM
Your opening two lines Jim make an excellent testimony and encouragement for us all.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:28:00 PM
wow!! i like Tirzah's contest, it bringing lots of laugh in words only. Enjoyed your poem.. Nice tittle, have a nice one,,yes and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 7/11/2010 8:57:00 PM
A nice one Jimbo.. good luck in Tirzah's contest.. luv your title too.. with luv..
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:34:00 PM
Very uplifting acrostic, Jimbo! This is the way we should all go through life -- living, laughing and loving. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:31:00 PM
A nice creative write for Tirzah's contest. Good luck
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