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Venturing Out

My husband ventured out today,
His virus on the wane.
He only took the briefest walk
But didn’t much complain.

For he was thrilled (and so was I)
To see him well enough
To leave his snug cocoon and have
The strength to strut his stuff.

He won’t be running marathons
And this I underscore
Because, in truth, he wasn’t running
Marathons before.

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John Watt

Date: 6/13/2020 3:59:00 PM

Great to hear your hubby is on the mend, ilene. Thanks for the laugh and smile.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/12/2020 12:58:00 PM

So sweet and clever as always, Ilene! I'm sorry to hear your hubby was sick but happy to know he's beginning to feel better. I can only imagine that some fresh air must feel wonderful after being cooped up. Happy Friday and blessings to you both, Rhonda xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/12/2020 5:53:00 AM

Wonderful news, Ilene. Happy for both of you. / Maurice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/11/2020 5:21:00 PM

The last two lines -- pure Alan Sherman!! I'm trying to think of the song. It's on Alan Sherman's Greatest Hits Album... Got it (thanks to the Internet this time): It's "One Hippopotami." What a great write you've delivered, Ilene! Kudos! A FAVE! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/11/2020 4:44:00 PM

Hello Ilene Bauer, oh this is good news that your husband is venturing outside walking. I am glad that he is better. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2020 3:18:00 PM

that is such wonderful news Ilene I am so happy he is on the mend, you must be so relieved... he MUST take it easy I know from friends how the illness takes its toll on ones strength. Lockdown is easing here, I am allowed to see mum next Tuesday for a short time:-) hugs Jan xx