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Venturing Out

My husband ventured out today, His virus on the wane. He only took the briefest walk But didn’t much complain. For he was thrilled (and so was I) To see him well enough To leave his snug cocoon and have The strength to strut his stuff. He won’t be running marathons And this I underscore Because, in truth, he wasn’t running Marathons before.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/13/2020 3:59:00 PM
Great to hear your hubby is on the mend, ilene. Thanks for the laugh and smile.
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Date: 6/12/2020 12:58:00 PM
So sweet and clever as always, Ilene! I'm sorry to hear your hubby was sick but happy to know he's beginning to feel better. I can only imagine that some fresh air must feel wonderful after being cooped up. Happy Friday and blessings to you both, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/12/2020 5:53:00 AM
Wonderful news, Ilene. Happy for both of you. / Maurice
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Date: 6/11/2020 5:21:00 PM
The last two lines -- pure Alan Sherman!! I'm trying to think of the song. It's on Alan Sherman's Greatest Hits Album... Got it (thanks to the Internet this time): It's "One Hippopotami." What a great write you've delivered, Ilene! Kudos! A FAVE! :) gw
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Date: 6/11/2020 4:44:00 PM
Hello Ilene Bauer, oh this is good news that your husband is venturing outside walking. I am glad that he is better. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/11/2020 3:18:00 PM
that is such wonderful news Ilene I am so happy he is on the mend, you must be so relieved... he MUST take it easy I know from friends how the illness takes its toll on ones strength. Lockdown is easing here, I am allowed to see mum next Tuesday for a short time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:16:00 PM
Good to hear Ilene, freedom at last. Tom
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:14:00 PM
Love and chuckles! So happy to read he is on the mend. Hugs! xomo
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:05:00 PM
Thanks for the laugh! Good to hear he is out and about, but do take care! Aloha! Rico
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