Venture Out

Intersection of
  Overwhelmed & Exhausted
    A decision to make 

  Venture out onto that
  Autobahn of Freeways
    Shake & Bake 
    Wide Awake & Overtake... 

  Turn the other way
  Crash & Burn
    Maddening price to pay  

  Yet ~
  Overwhelmed & Exhausted
    A DECISION to make
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Phew…wow! I decided not to venture out last night for chips…what was the price to pay? I had just finished watching “90 minutes in heaven”
Hawkins Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 8:08 PM
A car can be a lethal weapon, Boom, Boom!
Turner Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:44 PM
How about crash and burn?
Turner Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:59 PM
Whats mine is yours my friend:)
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:54 PM
O, Daniel, my savior!!! I couldn't think of that phrase. Can I use it? Please, please, please, please. Four pleases means yes, I think. I'm changing this poem right now. Thank you, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou! Hugs and Handshakes! Huzzah! Crazy Wolf
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