Ventriloquist

Corky Withers was a Very talented performer,
leaving audiences Excited and mystified
with his magic acts Night after night. 
More mesmerizing Than the sleight of hand
was his sidekick, the Raucous, rude dummy, Fats,
through which (whom) he Illustrated his ability
to speak through dead-still Lips. All eyes were on Fats.
Then—well, Fats took Over, so to speak.
Corky, by then Quite mad, ended up killing two people.
Seemingly unassuming and shy, he was Under the spell 
of the evil, controlling Fats—Corky’s true Id manifested.
I vividly remember some Scenes from Magic (1978)--
to me, a truly Terrifying movie.


Magic starred Anthony Hopkins, Ann-Margret, and Burgess Meredith.


June 17, 2018, entered in Anthony Slausen's Ventriloquist Poetry Contest
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Juman Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Very nice I like this my dear
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thanks so much, Al! Janice
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Interesting, novel way to do an acrostic, with the acrostic letters in the middle of the sentence. Like it very much! ~ Gershon
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice
Neumann Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:11 AM
I do not know the respective movie either. But your poem is quite (in the original sense of the word) excellent. I like the acrostic running through the middle of the lines. Many wishes, Kai
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so much, Kai! Janice
Hoffman Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:27 PM
A very interesting acrostic Janice; I don't remember that movie too well but anything with puppets in the movies are usually pretty terrifying! (Except for the Sesame Street gang lol!) Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Canerdy Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Yes, puppets AND CLOWNS!! Thanks so much for your comment. Janice
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 10:36 AM
A powerful take on the contest theme ... A sure win ...
Canerdy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Thanks so much, Probir! Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:57 PM
It looks so hard to do--I am amazed by your talents, friend..well done..hope you win BIG!
Canerdy Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Your kind words have made my night, Vijay! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Oh, I loved the allusion to Magic. It was a favorite movie of mine back in the day. Clever idea, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! The fact that I immediately think of that movie EVERY time I hear anything about a ventriloquist attests to the fact that it AFFECTED me!! Janice
Allison Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Wow Janice this is so so creative I'm seeing some fabulous interpretations of the contest theme, good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! I haven't seen that movie for years, but . . . .! Janice
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