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Ventriloquist

Corky Withers was a Very talented performer, leaving audiences Excited and mystified with his magic acts Night after night. More mesmerizing Than the sleight of hand was his sidekick, the Raucous, rude dummy, Fats, through which (whom) he Illustrated his ability to speak through dead-still Lips. All eyes were on Fats. Then—well, Fats took Over, so to speak. Corky, by then Quite mad, ended up killing two people. Seemingly unassuming and shy, he was Under the spell of the evil, controlling Fats—Corky’s true Id manifested. I vividly remember some Scenes from Magic (1978)-- to me, a truly Terrifying movie. Magic starred Anthony Hopkins, Ann-Margret, and Burgess Meredith. June 17, 2018, entered in Anthony Slausen's Ventriloquist Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/9/2018 12:33:00 PM
Very nice I like this my dear
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2018 12:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Al! Janice
Date: 7/2/2018 7:17:00 PM
Interesting, novel way to do an acrostic, with the acrostic letters in the middle of the sentence. Like it very much! ~ Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Janice
Date: 6/22/2018 6:11:00 AM
I do not know the respective movie either. But your poem is quite (in the original sense of the word) excellent. I like the acrostic running through the middle of the lines. Many wishes, Kai
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/22/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai! Janice
Date: 6/21/2018 7:27:00 PM
A very interesting acrostic Janice; I don't remember that movie too well but anything with puppets in the movies are usually pretty terrifying! (Except for the Sesame Street gang lol!) Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/21/2018 7:36:00 PM
Yes, puppets AND CLOWNS!! Thanks so much for your comment. Janice
Date: 6/18/2018 10:36:00 AM
A powerful take on the contest theme ... A sure win ...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/18/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Probir! Janice
Date: 6/17/2018 8:57:00 PM
It looks so hard to do--I am amazed by your talents, friend..well done..hope you win BIG!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/17/2018 10:39:00 PM
Your kind words have made my night, Vijay! Janice
Date: 6/17/2018 5:30:00 PM
Oh, I loved the allusion to Magic. It was a favorite movie of mine back in the day. Clever idea, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/17/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! The fact that I immediately think of that movie EVERY time I hear anything about a ventriloquist attests to the fact that it AFFECTED me!! Janice
Date: 6/17/2018 4:35:00 PM
Wow Janice this is so so creative I'm seeing some fabulous interpretations of the contest theme, good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/17/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! I haven't seen that movie for years, but . . . .! Janice

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