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Venomous Vampires Rule the Night

Darkened eyes that pull you in Fangs hidden under a grin That are sharp pointy and long They have powers that are strong No escaping from their bite They hunt in the darkest night Once they find you it's all done There's nowhere to hide or run In their nest is where you'll stay Your humanity will slip away As your necks used as a treat Just give in there's no defeat From these creatures very scary Making you so weak and weary Injecting you with poison venom Turning you into a demon That invades your inner soul You have just lost all control Of the person you once were Your past life is now a blur As this poison starts to act In the night you will attack Searching for someone to be Added to this family Hungry fangs are coming out Blood is dripping down your mouth Your stronger with every drop There is no way you can stop Addictions starting to set in Another victims claimed again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/30/2014 1:54:00 AM
.....wow, amazing! This actually really helped me because I'm supposed to write a poem on vampires and I couldn't think of what to do and when I saw this it gave me some ideas. (Don't worry, I won't copy anything from it). :D
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:59:00 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, robin
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:31:00 PM
way to go, Sweet Pea. A great entry and win in the vampire contest.
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Date: 12/8/2013 6:59:00 AM
Scary, well done Robin xx
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Date: 12/7/2013 9:01:00 PM
Great descriptive lines. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 12/7/2013 1:30:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Robin
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Date: 12/6/2013 6:24:00 PM
I think this conveyed better than anything the feeling hat all animals must have, as they surrender to death when attacked by that which is more powerful than they can resist. Well written. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:15:00 PM
You captured the theme perfectly. Congratulations Robin
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Date: 11/14/2013 4:39:00 PM
Very dark and very gothic! I loved it! Great flow to your words here and nice rhymes, too. This is an amazing entry for this contest, Robin! I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you for the great comments. I appreciate it very much! :)
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