Unseeking Seeker Poet Verse

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Venom

vacillating desires 
vicissitude of thought
vintage but valueless 
venting ego urges
vice vibes that vilify
vitiating our soul
volte-face yet we remain

05-May-2021

Pleiades V poetry contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

7 lines @ 6 syllables each

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Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2021 at 5:35 PM Congratulations ! Unseeking Seeker May 11, 2021 at 12:13 AM Thank you, Kim!

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2021 at 4:18 PM very cool, both the word you thought to do and the way you delivered. big congrats. Unseeking Seeker May 11, 2021 at 12:14 AM Thanks Andrea!

Terry Flood May 8, 2021 at 5:04 PM Sounds and reads great, Anne-Lise, now, where’s my dictionary? Congrats on your win. Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2021 at 11:30 AM - A scary picture, U.S. - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman May 8, 2021 at 11:30 AM Even the words you used to describe venom sound venomous. Well done! Congrats on your win, Unseeking Seeking! Blessings, Kim M Unseeking Seeker May 8, 2021 at 8:45 PM Thanks for hosting these series of Pleiades contests!

Christuraj Alex May 7, 2021 at 11:40 PM Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker May 8, 2021 at 1:01 AM Thank you, Alex!

Caren Krutsinger May 7, 2021 at 9:05 AM This will be in the winners circle unless the judge has a terror of snakes. Unseeking Seeker May 7, 2021 at 6:31 PM Thanks Caren! :)

Victor Buhagiar May 4, 2021 at 10:42 PM V for victory. Unseeking Seeker May 4, 2021 at 10:45 PM Hahaha! If you say so :)