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Velvet straps

Blushing blooming flower red blue full of desire she lays still pouring slowly spill drips of love holding tights and latex gloves she makes it easy but hard to breath slowly letting out with ease pushing further into night like heros fighting unlikely frieghts she wonders home step one two three leaving me here breathing slowly

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Alesia Leach

Date: 4/15/2025 6:15:00 PM

This feels like desire wrapped in velvet and exhaled through a dream. There’s a push-pull tension here--soft and blooming, but also shadowed and breathless. “She makes it easy / but hard to breathe” -- oof, what a line. That final walk away? Quietly devastating. Your work always feels like a memory being lived in real time.