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Velvet Mosses

The very velvet moss of you is lost forever from my forest floor

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:43:00 PM

great symbolic one. I really like this.

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/28/2016 11:58:00 AM

Thank you :)

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:40:00 AM

INGRID, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/26/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thanks Skat! :)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/26/2016 9:16:00 AM

Perfectly done Ingrid! :) Congratulations. -hans

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/26/2016 10:21:00 AM

Oh Thank you Hans ! :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/25/2016 2:39:00 AM

Wow Ingrid so lovely.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!!

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/26/2016 10:21:00 AM

Thank you so much! :) These are fun to write

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/25/2016 7:48:00 AM

Oh Thank you!!! This was my first short at this form and now I am hooked :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 9:12:00 PM

INGRID, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/26/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Linda...really enjoying these contests of yours!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/23/2016 9:42:00 AM

Beauty lost in despair! A seven ,dear Ingrid!

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/23/2016 7:44:00 PM

Demetrios, I am new here and to you...is seven 7 out of 10? or God's seven? Not a bad score either way but then we all love winning. If a 7 of 10 I should confess I might need to raise the level of the content of my write to the level of my understanding of all things...If a God/Universe 7 my work is done here :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/22/2016 1:23:00 PM

very beautiful one liner:-) hugs Jan xx

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/26/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Jan :)