Velvet Mosses

The very velvet moss of you is lost forever from my forest floor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:43 PM
great symbolic one. I really like this.
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Thank you :)
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:40 AM
INGRID, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Thanks Skat! :)
Selfa Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Perfectly done Ingrid! :) Congratulations. -hans
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Oh Thank you Hans ! :)
A. Sharma Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:39 AM
Wow Ingrid so lovely.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!!
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thank you so much! :) These are fun to write
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Oh Thank you!!! This was my first short at this form and now I am hooked :)
A   Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 9:12 PM
INGRID, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Linda...really enjoying these contests of yours!
Trifiatis Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Beauty lost in despair! A seven ,dear Ingrid!
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Demetrios, I am new here and to you...is seven 7 out of 10? or God's seven? Not a bad score either way but then we all love winning. If a 7 of 10 I should confess I might need to raise the level of the content of my write to the level of my understanding of all things...If a God/Universe 7 my work is done here :)
Allison Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:23 PM
very beautiful one liner:-) hugs Jan xx
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Jan :)
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